Question

9．假如你是李紅，最近和美國筆友Mary通過郵件談?wù)摳髯缘耐瑢W(xué)關(guān)系，她想了解你是如何與同學(xué)和睦相處的．請你根據(jù)她的問題回復(fù)郵件．
提示詞：play basketball，listen to music，help，relaxed

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從三個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：①在班里有多少個朋友②和朋友們一起做什么③和朋友一起感覺如何
重點短語：
1．in my spare time在我的空閑時間
2．talk about the famous singers 談?wù)撝�名歌�?br />3． the whole day 一整天
高分句型：
1．We are good at different subjects，so we can help each other to solve different problems．
我們擅長不同的科目，所以我們可以彼此幫助解決不同的問題．（be good at 擅長，后面跟名詞或動名詞）
2．And my friends make me realize having friends is really a happy thing．
我的朋友使我認(rèn)識到擁有朋友真的是一件開心的事情．（句式make sb．do sth．使某人做某事）

解答 Dear Mary，
   I'm glad to hear from you．And I'm happy to tell you something about my friends and me．I have four friends in my class．（在班里有多少個朋友）And I do a lot of things with them in my spare time．I often play basketball with my friends after school．Playing basketball helps me to know how to work with others．Sometimes I listen to music and sing songs with my friends．Also，we talk about the famous singers and the words of the songs．It makes me feel relaxed after the whole day study．Of course，we study together．We are good at different subjects，so we can help each other to solve different problems（和朋友們一起做什么）（高分句型）．
   When I stay with my friends，I always feel happy because we can learn from each other and help each other．And my friends make me realize having friends is really a happy thing．（和朋友一起感覺如何）（高分句型）．
   What do you often do with your friends？Write and tell me．
   Yours，
                                                             Li Hong

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫． 根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．