Question

10．同學(xué)們，你夢想的職業(yè)是什么呢？在下周英語角活動中，學(xué)校將組織一"My dream job"為題目的英語演講比賽．請你根據(jù)一下的問題提示，寫一篇演講稿，講講自己夢想的工作．
提示：1．What do you want to be when you grow up？
2．How are you going to do that？
要求：1．不能遺漏提示內(nèi)容，鼓勵適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．語言通順，語法準(zhǔn)確，卷面干凈．
3．不少于80詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入詞數(shù)．
Hello，everyone!Everyone has his or her dream job                                               

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice．也許成為導(dǎo)游是最好的選擇．
本句是動名詞短語being a tour guide 作為主語，謂語用is．還用最高級best來總結(jié)上文給出的原因說這是最好的選擇
【高分句型二】
If I become a tour guide，I can travel all around China，and know more about our country．如果我成為一名導(dǎo)游，我能游遍全中國，更了解我們國家．
本句是運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來

解答 Hello，everyone!Everyone has his or her dream job，so do I．My dream job is to be a tour guide．（夢想是什么．）
    Why do I want to be a tour guide？First of all，I‘m an outgoing girl，and I like doing some exciting things．Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice【高分句型一】If I become a tour guide，I can travel all around China，and know more about our country【高分句型二】Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history．Second，I like making friends．If I work as a tour guide，I can make a lot of friends all over the world．This may be great．Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries．I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture．What's more，I like singing．Singing English songs is my favorite．I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists．Their trip will be excellent．（理由）
    Now，I am still a middle school student．My job now is to work hard in school．Then I'll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide．I'm sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future．（怎樣實現(xiàn)夢想）
    There is an old saying："No pain，no gain．"I'll try my best to make my dream come true!

點(diǎn)評 寫作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．