Question

4．要求：句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
【審題指導(dǎo)】細讀所給的文字提示，提取信息：1．引出該話題，寫出自我．

Answer 1

分析 學(xué)會自我保護是青少年需要具備的一種意識和能力．就學(xué)校安全教育周收集的自我保護小貼士，寫一篇關(guān)于自我保護的作文．在寫作時要表達清楚，信息完整，語言通順，語意連貫．充分利用好提示語言，使作文結(jié)構(gòu)完整．

解答 How Can We Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers．But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some of my suggestions．
First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially online．Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe．Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely．Besides，we shouldn't crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school．Last but not least，summer is coming，we must remember it's dangerous to swim alone．
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．
【亮點說明】這是一篇很貼近學(xué)生生活的作文，對于安全問題，不容忽視．作者圍繞所給提示語展開了寫作，比較成功．文中還用到了不少短語，make friends，in danger，call…for…，in time，so that，ought to，go upstairs or downstairs，stay away from等，為作文增添了色彩．
考點：提示性作文．

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應(yīng)該仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫． 根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．