Question

寫作（20分）。 請(qǐng)以I love my family 為題，寫一篇成長(zhǎng)感言， 內(nèi)容包括：

1。 介紹你的家人。

2。 描述一件最令你感動(dòng)的事。

3。 表達(dá)你的感激之情。

具體要求； 1。 不少于80詞。 2。 字跡工整

3。 不使用真名。 4。 語法準(zhǔn)確，語句通順

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Answer 1

There are five people in my family. They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and me. My parents work in a big city in order to make money for living. We live with my grandmother in a small town. My sister and I are students. We study hard. They all love me.

Last year, I was ill. I had a fever at midnight. But it was raining outside. My home is far away from the hospital. My grandmother was so worried about me, she took me to the hospital and looked after me all the night.

I love my family, I love my grandmother. I hope my parents can work in my hometown. And we can take care of my grandmother well.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。