Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）

根據(jù)表格提供的信息，以The Changes of Our School為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文，談?wù)勀銈儗W(xué)校的變化。參考詞匯：teaching building, basketball court

過去	現(xiàn)在
學(xué)校小，教室少而且舊，屋內(nèi)光線暗。 只有十幾個(gè)老師。 校園內(nèi)花草樹木少。 操場小。	有兩座高大的教學(xué)樓，室內(nèi)光線好，還有電腦室和圖書館。 老師增多了。 校園內(nèi)花草樹木隨處可見。 有籃球場和足球場。

The Changes of Our School

Great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years.

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Answer 1

The Changes of Our School

Great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years. In the past ,our school was small .There weren’t many classrooms and they were old and dark. Only a few teachers worked here. We could hardly find flowers or trees in it .And the playground was very small. Everything has changed now. Two tall and bright teaching buildings have appeared in our school .We also have our own computer room and library. More teachers are working here. We can see flowers and trees everywhere. What’s more, we can enjoy playing ball games on the basketball court or on the football court.

I hope our school will become more and more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要寫學(xué)校的過去和現(xiàn)在，因此一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的句子使用比較多，，所以在寫作時(shí)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: what’s more；enjoy playing ball games；Everything has changed now；We can see flowers and trees everywhere；I hope our school will become more and more beautiful in the future。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。