Question

書面表達《共1題，計20分）

根據(jù)中英文提示，以“My Hometown”為題，寫一篇意思連貫，符合邏輯，字數(shù)不少于60詞的英文作文

提示：1.介紹家鄉(xiāng)萊蕪。人口一百多萬，四分之三的人住在農(nóng)村。有許多美麗的景點。

近十年來，萊蕪發(fā)生了巨大變化，建起了許多高樓，修建了許多公路，道路更寬更干凈，家庭轎車越來越多。城內(nèi)出現(xiàn)了堵車，空氣越來越糟。

2.做一名文明初中生，盡量步行或乘公交上學，既利于交通又利于健康，努力使我們的城市越來越好。

提示詞: Xueye Lake, Laiwu Campaign Memorial (萊蕪戰(zhàn)役紀念館); Fanggan Tourist Area (房干旅游區(qū)) , traffic(交通), change, new buildings, obey, rules, be friendly to,

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Answer 1

Laiwu is my hometown. It has a population of about one million. 3/4 of the population live in rural areas. There are many beautiful scenic spots here.

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in Laiwu. Many tall buildings and roads have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner. More and more families have cars. There are often traffic jams in the city. And the air is getting worse and worse.

To be good middle school students, we should try to walk or take the bus to school. It is good not only for the traffic but also for our health. Let’s do our best to make our city better and better.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求以“My Hometown”為題，寫一篇英語短文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作內(nèi)容: 1.介紹家鄉(xiāng)萊蕪。人口一百多萬，四分之三的人住在農(nóng)村。有許多美麗的景點。近十年來，萊蕪發(fā)生了巨大變化，建起了許多高樓，修建了許多公路，道路更寬更干凈，家庭轎車越來越多。城內(nèi)出現(xiàn)了堵車，空氣越來越糟。 2.做一名文明初中生，盡量步行或乘公交上學，既利于交通又利于健康，努力使我們的城市越來越好。主要內(nèi)容雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，介紹了家鄉(xiāng)萊蕪并說明要做一名文明的初中生，層次非常的清晰。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如 It is good not only for the traffic but also for our health. Let’s do our best to make our city better and better.等。

考點：話題類作文。