Question

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根據(jù)提示，以“Tom's Lifestyle"為題寫一篇60字左右的作文。

提示：1.通常在家吃早飯，早飯有雞蛋，面包和牛奶。

2.中午在學(xué)校吃飯，午飯有米飯，肉和蔬菜，有時還有魚。

3.晚飯通常和家人一起吃。晚飯非常美味可口。（tasty)

Tom's lifestyle

Answer 1

Tom's Lifestyle

Tom is my good friend He usually eats breakfast at home, He eats egg, bread and milk for breakfast.He has lunch at school,He has rice, meat and vegetables for lunch and sometimes He has fish. He usually eats dinner with my family together.The dinner was very delicious. (tasty)

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹湯姆的生活方式。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is ...， He usually eats...；等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了湯姆不健康的生活方式，接下來介紹此處用了 He usually eats dinner with my family together等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：話題作文。