Question

5．學(xué)生安全問題已引起學(xué)校、家長、社會的高度關(guān)注，為了進一步增強中學(xué)生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以"How to keep safe？"為主題的英語演講比賽．請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇演講稿．

注意：（1）內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
（3）詞數(shù)80-100左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：be careful，go bad  turn off  tap（自來水龍頭），obey．

Hello，everyone!I'm glad to share my ideas about how to keep safe here．As middle school students，we should           Thanks for listening．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health．吃變質(zhì)的食物對健康有害．that goes bad 是定語從句，修飾先行詞food，do harm to 對…有害．
 高分句型二
If we are in danger，we should call the police for help in time如果我們有危險，我們應(yīng)該及時報警．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．如果…．

解答 Hello，everyone!I'm glad to share my ideas about how to keep safe here．As middle school students，we should pay attention to the following to keep safe．【要點一，點明主題】
  First，we ought to eat healthily and safely．Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health【高分句型一，注意定語從句的使用】．Second，the safety in traffic is also required for most of the students who rely on the public transportation every day．If we are in danger，we should call the police for help in time【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】．We also have to be careful when we make friends，especially online．What's more，we should be careful when we use electricity．Last but not the least，it's dangerous to swim in the river．【要點二，詳細介紹如何保持安全】
  In short，safety must come first!Thanks for listening．【要點三，結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．