Question

7．臨近中考，你有很多煩心事．最讓你心煩的是你的父母．他們特別關(guān)注你的學(xué)習(xí)，每次測驗的結(jié)果你都要報告給他們．如果考得好，他們就會開心和滿意．但如果沒有，他們就會擔(dān)心．尤其是你的媽媽．她已經(jīng)為你的未來制定好了計劃．你很討厭這一點，但又不想讓她失望，你不知道怎么辦才好．
Mr Help 是你們學(xué)校特邀的青少年的知心朋友．請你用 little upset的署名給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，把你的煩惱告訴他，或許他能幫到你．

寫作要求：
1、郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2、可以適度發(fā)揮，使行文連貫．
3、80-100詞左右的英語短文．
注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實姓名、校名和地名．
參考詞匯：中考the Senior School Entrance Examination   煩心事 upset
My Mr Help，
I'm a middle school student．Recently，one thingdisturbed me all the time．As you know that，the Senior School Entrance Examination is coming closerand my parents paid much attention to my study．After the end of a test，I had to tell them how was that going，if it was good，they was happy．However，if it was bad，they worried about my study．Moreover，I hate that my mom had make a plan for mu future life．All these upsets make me unhappy and I don't know what to do．I hope that you can give me a hand．Wish to receive your reply．
Yours
Little upset．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：the Senior School Entrance Examination is coming closer中考越來越近了，用比較級形式表示越來越近；
高分句型二：I hate that my mom had make a plan for mu future life我討厭媽媽已經(jīng)為我安排好了今后的生活，此處用that引導(dǎo)賓語從句，表示討厭什么；
高分句型三：．I hope that you can give me a hand我希望你能給我提供幫助，此處用that引導(dǎo)賓語從句，同時運用詞組give sb a hand幫忙．

解答 My Mr Help，
I'm a middle school student．Recently，one thing disturbed me all the time．As you know that，the Senior School Entrance Examination is coming closer（高分句型一） and my parents paid much attention to my study（說明原因一）．After the end of a test，I had to tell them how was that going，if it was good，they was happy．However，if it was bad，they worried about my study．Moreover，I hate that my mom had make a plan for mu future life（高分句型二，說明原因二）．All these upsets make me unhappy and I don't know what to do（說明為什么要尋求幫助）．I hope that you can give me a hand（高分句型三，請求幫忙）．Wish to receive your reply．Yours
Little upset．

點評 對于作文題，首先應(yīng)該充分了解題目的含義及要求．若給定的條件不足，可進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；同時，平時還應(yīng)該多注意關(guān)鍵句型、固定短語及高分句型的理解及記憶，做題時才能得心應(yīng)手．