Question

埃及千年神廟驚現(xiàn)中文涂鴉“丁 ××到此一游”。此事曝光后，引起國(guó)內(nèi)外廣泛關(guān)注，某國(guó)外英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站就此發(fā)起討論。請(qǐng)你以一名中國(guó)中學(xué)生（網(wǎng)名Whitecloud） 的身份，跟帖發(fā)表自己的看法。

要點(diǎn)提示：1.表明身份；2. 發(fā)表看法；3. 你的行動(dòng)

要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右， 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Bluesky：“丁xx到此一游”。Appeared in the ancient temple in Egypt. It’s said ding

is a Chinese school student. That’s surprising. Maybe Ding will become known this

Whitecloud: I come from China

Answer 1

Whitecloud: I come from China. I’m also a middle school student like Ding. When I read the news, my heart ached. What Ding did made me sad. Ding should feel sorry for that. As a student, it’s very important to care about what we do in public. For example, we’d better keep our voice down. I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. And I’m sure we Chinese will show our best to the whole world!

Sincerely yours,

【解析】

這篇短文要求以一名中國(guó)中學(xué)生（網(wǎng)名Whitecloud） 的身份，跟帖發(fā)表自己的看法。我們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)要注意：1. 注意時(shí)態(tài)，談自己的感受用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，訴說(shuō)丁的做法時(shí)，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，談?wù)撟约旱南敕ê驮竿麜r(shí)，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2. 要把提示內(nèi)容全部寫進(jìn)去，避免生搬硬套。3. 要注意句式不要單一。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1. 本文緊扣要求寫出了作者的身份，作者的看法和作者的行動(dòng)。2.本文句式不單一，有it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子：I As a student, it’s very important to care about what we do in public. 一般將來(lái)時(shí)：I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. 賓語(yǔ)從句：And I’m sure we Chinese will show our best to the whole world!