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19．以My hometown為題寫一篇80詞左右的文章，包含下列要點(diǎn)并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順．
1 鎮(zhèn)江是我的家鄉(xiāng)，一個(gè)古老、美麗且現(xiàn)代化的城市．有著名的金山、焦山和北固山，還有購(gòu)物中心、電影院等，鎮(zhèn)江也因美食而聞名．鎮(zhèn)江人勤勞、友好，鄰居之間很友好、互相幫助．
2 我住在鎮(zhèn)江市中心的一所公寓里．在火車站的西面，離車站500米遠(yuǎn)，你很容易找到．
3 我認(rèn)為…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I think Zhenjiang is a good place to visit，我認(rèn)為鎮(zhèn)江是一個(gè)游覽的好地方．句子中to visit作定語(yǔ)修飾place．
②I hope you will visit my hometown soon．我希望你能很快訪問我的家鄉(xiāng)．句子中hope后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My hometown
My hometown is Zhenjiang．（引出話題）It is an old and beautiful city，it is also modern．There are many places of interest such as Jinshan Park，Jiaoshan Park and Beigu Park，they are very famous in China．In the center of the city，there are some shopping malls，cinemas and other tall buildings．Food in Zhenjiang is very delicious．People here are very friendly and hardworking，the neighbours are very kind，they often help each other．（介紹鎮(zhèn)江的一些基本情況）
I live in a flat in the center of the city．It is the west of the railway station，it is about 500 meters from there．，you can find it easily．（介紹我的住處）
I think Zhenjiang is a good place to visit（高分句型）．I hope you will visit my hometown soon（高分句型）．（我的想法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．