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8．假設(shè)你叫李俊，你的美國(guó)朋友大衛(wèi)（David）想認(rèn)識(shí)更多的中國(guó)朋友．請(qǐng)通過(guò)電子郵年向他介紹你最好的朋友王明．王明情況見(jiàn)下表：

性別	男	年齡	14
外貌	方臉，大眼睛，短發(fā)，高個(gè)子
個(gè)性	幽默，守秘密，從不說(shuō)他人壞話
愛(ài)好	喜歡動(dòng)物，在家養(yǎng)了一些寵物
理想	當(dāng)一名校長(zhǎng)（headmaster），因?yàn)樗�喜歡與孩子們?cè)谝黄?/TD>
春節(jié)計(jì)劃	寒假到美國(guó)旅游，參觀美國(guó)白宮．

要求：1語(yǔ)言通順，意思連續(xù)，書寫規(guī)范；
2詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you．
                                                
You can email him at WM2000@163．com．I hope you two will become good friends soon．
Best wishes，
Li Jun．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
he likes winter best because he likes building snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends他最喜歡冬天，因?yàn)樗�喜歡堆雪人和朋友打雪仗．
because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
So he wants to be a headmaster when he grows up他長(zhǎng)大了想成為一名校長(zhǎng)．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you．
He is 14 years old．（性別年齡）He is tall with two big eyes．He is tall and has short hair．（外貌）
Wang Ming has a good sense of humor．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．（個(gè)性）
He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me．He is interested in learning about different kinds of pets and he keeps some pets at home．Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．【高分句型一】（愛(ài)好）
He likes to be with children．So he wants to be a headmaster when he grows up【高分句型二】．（夢(mèng)想）
On winter vacation，I plan to travel to America to visit the  White House．（計(jì)劃）
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can．Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival．
     Best wishes，
Li Jun．

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