Question

Writing.（15分）

上周日你和朋友去陽光公園游玩時看到公園內(nèi)的一些不文明行為。請你根據(jù)以下圖畫提示，為校報英語專欄寫一篇報道，談?wù)勥@些不文明行為，并呼吁大家告別不文明行為，愛護環(huán)境。

要求: 1. 根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容進行寫作, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; 2. 90個詞左右。參考詞匯: 胡寫, 亂畫scribble; 不文明的uncivilized; 草坪lawn

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Last Sunday I went to the Sun Park with my friends. The scenery was beautiful and we had a good time there. But at the same time I found some bad behavior in the park: some people scribbled on the wall; some people played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere. The bad behavior made the park look ugly. I think the park is a public place. It’s everyone’s duty to keep it clean. Let’s stop all uncivilized behavior to make the park more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖畫作文。根據(jù)圖畫可知公園中人們的一些不文明行為：在草坪上踢足球、在墻上亂寫亂畫、隨地亂扔垃圾等。寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達(dá)備用，最后串聯(lián)起來。

【亮點說明】本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點，語句通順，標(biāo)點符號運用正確。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用了一些短語和句式，如have a good time,at the same time,make sb/sth do/形容詞等。

考點：圖畫作文。