Question

書面表達（15分）

我的未來不是夢，有一個好的夢想是一個人走向成功的第一步。以“My Life in Ten Years”為題寫篇短文，要求描寫生動，語言流暢，60詞左右。

Answer 1

My life in ten years

In ten years .I think I will live in Beijing. Because I went to Beijing last year, and I think it was a beautiful city .I fell in love with it. I will be a basketball player the same as Yao Ming .I think basketball player is very cool. And I will have many pets like dogs , cats and parrots .I love animals . I think they are very cut and clever .And I think have a red car . It will be very cool. I will drive it every day .I will play basketball erevy day .Because I will be a basketball player .I love playing basketball.

I think my dream can come true

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以“My Life in Ten Years”為題寫篇短文，要求描寫生動，語言流暢，60詞左右。在動筆寫作前，一定要認真思考該寫什么內(nèi)容。并且用恰當?shù)木渥颖磉_，力爭不出現(xiàn)語病。

【亮點說明】條理清楚，語言簡潔，重點突出，時態(tài)正確。能用到學過的句型，能表達出自己的意思。

考點：話題作文。