Question

Writing 9(2012 梅州)

        目前，我國城市化進程的實施給從鄉(xiāng)村(鎮(zhèn)) 遷人城市的大多數(shù)孩子帶來諸多問題，特別是在交朋友方面。假如你是 Know,你的朋友Tony發(fā)電子郵件請教你關于如何交朋友的問題，請你給他回復一封電子郵件提幾點建議，詞數(shù)約80左右。

   內(nèi)容包括如下：

   1.在小區(qū)內(nèi)玩耍時,你可以主動與他們交流成為新朋友，并告知家長；

   2.請求父母帶你去圖書館或一些公共場所，既可認識更多伙伴又可參加文體活動；

   3.在星期天，可外出郊游等�？傊�，多參加交流活動，克服困難，保持耐心。

要求：1.涵蓋所有要點，意思連貫，符合邏輯。

     2.卷面整潔、書寫規(guī)范工整。不得逐字翻譯。

(可目旨用到的何：First,Second,Third,In conclusion)

Dear Know,

I need some advice on how to make friends!1 have just moved to a new city.I am 13. 1 don't know anybody here and I want to make some friends.What^s the best way? Where can I meet people?

                                                                                                                                Yours,

                                                                                                                                    Tony 

Dear Tony

There are lots of things you can do.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

It takes time and patience (耐心) .I hope you will find a best friend soon!

                                                                                                                                 Yours,

                                                                                                                                     Know

Answer 1

Writing 9

[寫作要點]

(1) 審題：本文是一篇文字引導性作文，屬于記敘文。主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn) 在時；

(2) 確定要點：

  ① 主動與他們交流，并告知家長；

  ② 去圖書館或其他公共場所，結(jié)i只更多朋友并參加文體活動；

  ③ 星期天外出郊游。

[參考范文]

Dear Tony, 

   There are lots of things you can do.First,you can ride your bike in your neighborhood and try to find some kids.When you find some,you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second,you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some places where there are lots of kids. You can try joining an art class or a sports club.These are all great ways to meet people.Third,you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays. In conclusion,tiy to be active wherever you are,but just be yourself and don't try so hard. It takes time and patience (耐心) .1 hope you will find a best friend soon! 

Yours, 

Know