Question

根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容寫一篇約70個(gè)詞的短文。要求內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句通順，符合語(yǔ)法。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One day,a blind man was walking across the street. A car was going to him. At that time Jack was running up to him and pulling him back. The man was saved. And Jack took him to the other side of the street .The man thanked him for doing that.

But Jack didn’t wait for his thanks and went to school quickly. But he was still late for class.

Jack told the teacher why he was late . Hearing this the teacher asked the other students to learn from him.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖畫作文。本文作者分三部分別寫幫助盲人過(guò)馬路、向?qū)W校跑和上課遲到，全文用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)講述。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如walk across，At that time， pull him back，the other side of the street，thank him for doing that，wait for，went to school，late for class.learn from，現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，Hearing this被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)The man was saved，賓語(yǔ)從句Jack told the teacher why he was late。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：圖畫作文