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書面表達(dá)(20分)

學(xué)校將在下周舉行英文演講比賽，Jack的話題是 “對我影響最深的人”，請根據(jù)以下材料，幫他組織一篇英文演講稿，介紹一下三位對他影響最深的人。

Persons	Occupation	Details
My father	a cook	1.40多歲，中等身材 2.充滿愛心（具體表現(xiàn)……） 3.令我驚訝的是，他已決定去世后捐贈遺體供醫(yī)學(xué)研究
Tan Dun	a composer	1.譚盾，1958年出生在湖南省中部地區(qū)，從小對音樂很感興趣 2.把中西方音樂融合在一起 3.……（發(fā)揮一點(diǎn)）
Jackie Chan	a film star	1.成龍，已參演了近100部影片，獲得了許多獎項(xiàng) 2.多年從事慈善工作（具體表現(xiàn)……） 3.被公認(rèn)為是一位超級明星，受到人們高度贊揚(yáng)

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

Answer 1

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My father is a cook. He is 40 years old. He is of of medium height. He is full of love. He often helps others. To my surprise, He has decided to donate his whole body for medical research when he die.

Tan Dun is a composer. He was born in the central area of Hunan Province in 1958. He has been interested in music since he was young. He is such an excellent composer that he can make music without boundaries.

Jackie Chan is a film star. He has appeared in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. For many years he engaged in charity work. He is recognized as a super star and is praised highly by people.

They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

【解析】

試題分析：1，仔細(xì)審題。注意題目的具體要求，明確寫作要求，確立文章要用的時態(tài)。本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。2，注意寫作要點(diǎn)，理出寫作框架。本篇書面表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，應(yīng)注意將提示的內(nèi)容寫完全，不要遺漏。3，連句成篇，注意語言的連貫和過渡。在寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，會使文章過渡自然。最后還需檢查單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、大小寫等細(xì)節(jié)問題。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了一些連接詞如so…that等等，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和并列句，這些都為文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。