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【題目】根據(jù)以下提示，請以"How to Keep Healthy"為題寫一篇短文。從良好的生活習(xí)慣、適當(dāng)?shù)捏w育鍛煉以及健康的飲食習(xí)慣等方面，為"how to keep healthy"提出良好的建議。要求：1). 表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；
2). 不得使用真實(shí)的地名、校名和姓名等；
3). 詞數(shù)：80左右。文章的開頭與結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
部分參考詞匯：熬夜stay up；垃圾食品junk food；均衡飲食keep a balanced diet；按時(shí)飲食have meals regularly
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy……
. In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.

Answer 1

【答案】How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Here are three main ways to keep healthy.

Firstly, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet. We aren't supposed to eat too much junk food. It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day. What's more, we are supposed to have meals regularly. Secondly, we shouldn't stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is also necessary. Finally, it is important to take regular exercise, such as swimming, jogging and so on.

In a word, we should develop a good habit of keeping healthy. In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.

【解析】這是一篇話題作文。根據(jù)所給材料可知應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱的復(fù)數(shù)。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，在第二段中作者首先說保持均衡的飲食很重要，并從三個(gè)方面加以說明。然后作者告訴我們要保持健康要有足夠的睡眠。最后要我們進(jìn)行有規(guī)律的鍛煉，作者從這三個(gè)方面給我們說明了然后保持健康。語句通順，意思連貫，內(nèi)容完整；作者用Firstly, Secondly, Finally,三個(gè)副詞使文章條理清晰，What's more ，In a word be(not)supposed to 等短語以及it’s +形容詞+for sb to do sth 句式的多次使用為短文增添了色彩。
同時(shí)要主語時(shí)態(tài)人稱符合要求，寫作時(shí)要注意描述的全面性，語言表達(dá)符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，句子應(yīng)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。