Question

7．在家庭里、在社會中，只要我們從自身做起，我們的行為就可以為實現(xiàn)和諧社會（harmonious society）起到推進作用．你們學校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（從自身做起）為題舉行征文活動，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內容，用英語寫一篇征文．

	行    為	作    用
在家庭里	（1）幫助父母做家務事 （2）和父母多交流	（1）讓父母不太累 （2）…
在社會中	（1）不亂扔垃圾 （2）… （3）…	（1）使環(huán)境美化 （2）… （3）…
展望：如果我們每個人…

要求：1．表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2．必須包括所有相關信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
4．不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等．
Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．We do the house in order to let them have a rest．We should also talk with them more，it can help us understand each other better．
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．It can make our environment more beautiful．Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇表格給出信息的提綱類作文．內容為根據(jù)下列表格提示的內容以Doing Our Part為題，為實現(xiàn)和諧社會（harmonious society）寫一篇征文．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱為第一人稱．寫作要點包括：1．引入話題；2．在家里我們應當做的事和作用；3．在社會上，我們應當做的事和作用；4．對未來的展望．常用到的重點句型和短語：it is time for sb to do sth，must表推測，in order to do，had better do，in a word等．

解答 Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．We do the house in order to let them have a rest．We should also talk with them more，it can help us understand each other better．
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．It can make our environment more beautiful．Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．

點評 這是一篇提綱類作文．通過給出題目及表格限制了考生作文的范疇．它要求考生緊扣題目主題，并根據(jù)提綱提示的思路和要點展開段落．考生在作文時需注意內容完整，語句流暢，無語法錯誤及書寫規(guī)范．