Question

11．Jimmy 是一個初中生，自從參加了Buddy Club他改變了很多，并且他認(rèn)為還會變得更好，請根據(jù)以下表格，假設(shè)你是Jimmy，寫一篇60詞左右短文．開頭已給出．

	In the past	Now
Personalities	shy，quiet，get nervous easily	brave，outgoing
Hobbies	reading	reading，singing
Abilities		good at dancing，singing

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly．Jimmyused to be a shy and quiet girl．He used to get nervous easily．His face often turned red when he spoke with strangers．【高分句型一】He liked nothing but reading alone in his free time．However，he has changed a lot since he joined the Buddy Club．Now Jimmy is so brave and outgoing that he isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．【高分句型二】What's more，he has lots of hobbies，such as singing，writing and dancing．He is good at them as well．（Jimmy的變化）
People should change all the time，right？What we should do is to learn from Jimmy．Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves．（我的感想）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
His face often turned red when he spoke with strangers．
句中"when he spoke with strangers"為時間狀語從句，這句話意為：當(dāng)他跟陌生人說話時，他的臉經(jīng)常變紅．
高分句型二：
Now Jimmy is so brave and outgoing that he isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．
句中使用了"so…that…如此…以致于…"結(jié)構(gòu)，其中that后跟的是結(jié)果狀語從句，句中短語有"be afraid of doing sth 害怕做某事"．這句話意為：現(xiàn)在Jimmy很勇敢、外向，他不再害怕在公共場合大聲說話．

解答 Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
Jimmy used to be a shy and quiet girl．He used to get nervous easily．His face often turned red when he spoke with strangers．【高分句型一】He liked nothing but reading alone in his free time．However，he has changed a lot since he joined the Buddy Club．Now Jimmy is so brave and outgoing that he isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．【高分句型二】What's more，he has lots of hobbies，such as singing，writing and dancing．He is good at them as well．（Jimmy的變化）
People should change all the time，right？What we should do is to learn from Jimmy．Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves．（我的感想）

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