Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文。

所給英文提示詞僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

你有過獨(dú)自一人在家的經(jīng)歷嗎？請根據(jù)你的親身經(jīng)歷選擇情況A或情況B完成短文。

情況A：曾經(jīng)獨(dú)自一人在家。你的某次經(jīng)歷及其感受是什么樣的？

情況B：未曾獨(dú)自一人在家。如果有這樣的一次機(jī)會，你的父母會放心嗎？你又會怎樣照顧自己呢？

提示詞：look after, have fun, miss, grow, worried, excited, surprised

Home alone

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Answer 1

A

I’ve been home alone for several times and my first stay at home alone was memorable.

When I was twelve, once both of my parents were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. They left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mom to do it.

I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.

B

Up to now I’ve never had a chance to be at home alone. But if there’s one in the future, I guess I will take care of myself very easily.The reasons are as follows.

First of all, I keep a good daily routine. That’s to say, I can get up and go to bed at usual time by myself. And I can cook simple food. The most important reason is that I can balance my study and entertainment.

Therefore, my parents won’t worry about me if they have to stay away for a few days.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】A這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: For fear of getting up late the next morning,使用到固定短語get up，以及介詞+動名詞；In order to prove that I could take care of myself,I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mom to do it.I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.為了證明我能照顧好自己，在第二天下午洗了自己的衣服，雖然我可以等這讓母親去做這件事。句中使用到in order to,though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句。以及be proud of以...自豪。

B這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: Up to now；have a chance to do sth.But if there’s one in the future, I guess I will take care of myself very easily.條件狀語從句。Therefore因此。The most important reason is that I can balance my study and entertainment. 表語從句。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。