Question

【題目】目前，“低頭族”（phubber）的隊伍越來越龐大。我們可以在地鐵上、在公園里隨處可見手捧電子設備的人們，或專注于微信，或專注于游戲。其實“低頭”帶來很多危害，請用英文介紹這一行為的弊端，并發(fā)起“不再低頭”(No phubbing)的倡議。

bad aspects	bad aspects
is bad for eyes	read books
have bad influence on their work or study	do sports
communicate less with families	…
…	…

注意：①必須包含表格中所含信息，并提出自己的兩點建議。
② 文中不出現(xiàn)真實校名、姓名。
③不少于80詞。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
These days，more and more people spend too much time on the electric screens. ……

Answer 1

【答案】These days, more and more people spend too much time on the electric screens. It's really bad for their health. Now it's time to stop phubbing.
First, it is bad for their eyes. It also has bad influence on their work or study because of playing with the electric products. What's worse, they communicate less with their families and finally cause more relative problems.
Some people think it is necessary for people to do more sports and travel in their free time. It's also a good way to read books to open up their eyes. They should take part in more outdoor activities to help them relax.
In my opinion, hanging out with friends is a good way to stay away from electric screens. They can also take up some hobbies in their spare time, such as playing the piano or learning to draw. Anyway, it's important for us to lead a healthy life!
【解析】本題是一片提綱性的寫作。寫作的話題為“低頭族”（phubber），在寫作時應注意符合語境，根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)，語態(tài)。語言表達上要符合英語的表達方式，英語的表達重頭，漢語表達重尾，切忌漢式英語。
寫作步驟：

• 一.閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點。
• 1.如今越來越多的人花費太多時間在電子屏幕上。 more and more people spend too much time on the electric screens.
• 2.這是一種壞習慣，現(xiàn)在是時候停止低頭了。. It's really bad for their health. Now it's time to stop phubbing.
• 3.首先，它有害于眼睛。 it is bad for their eyes.
• 4.更多的，與家人交談的更少，最終造成了更多的家庭問題。communicate less with their families and finally cause more relative problems.
• 5.他們應該參加更多的戶外活動去放松自己。They should take part in more outdoor activities to help them relax.
• 6.在我的觀點中，和朋友出去，培養(yǎng)一些興趣愛好都是遠離電子屏幕的好方法。 hanging out with friends is a good way. take up some hobbies.
• 7.不管怎樣，一個健康的生活是很重要的。 Anyway, it's important for us to lead a healthy life!
• 二.根據要點，寫出關鍵詞，短語和句子。
• 三.組詞成句，連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時。