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足夠的睡眠時間對學(xué)生來講很重要，然而調(diào)查顯示，許多學(xué)生睡眠不足。請根據(jù)圖示

內(nèi)容，簡要指出學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因并提出建議。

Reason:spend too much time…

Have bad sleeping habits…

Suggestions: keep away from…

not stay up…

Problem:

Having no enough sleeping time

要求：

1．要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，題目自擬。

2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

3．文章必須包含上述所有提示內(nèi)容，除了上述給的提示，至少寫出2條來改善學(xué)生睡眠的建議

提示詞：reason 理由 keep away from 遠(yuǎn)離… stay up 熬夜 suggestion 建議

It’s impotant for students to have enough sleeping time.However…

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Answer 1

One possible version：

It's important for students to have enough sleeping time. However ,many of them don’ t have enough time to sleep．

There are different reasons for it．Some students often spend too much time on computer games so that they don’t go to bed early．Some students have bad sleeping habits．They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed．This makes them too excited to fall asleep .．

In order to get enough sleep ,we should keep away from computer games．We shouldn’t stay up too late . What’s more ,we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft music before we go to bed ,which can help us have a sound sleep．

In a word , if we make good use of time and form good habits , we’ll have enough sleeping time . Then we’ll be happier and healthier .

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文告訴我們：足夠的睡眠時間對學(xué)生來講很重要，然而調(diào)查顯示，許多學(xué)生睡眠不足。要求大家請根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，簡要指出學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因并提出建議。并且要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，題目自擬。詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；文章必須包含上述所有提示內(nèi)容，除了上述給的提示，至少寫出2條來改善學(xué)生睡眠的建議。提示詞：reason 理由 keep away from 遠(yuǎn)離… stay up 熬夜 suggestion 建議。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇不錯的作文。段落層次清楚，語言流暢，沒有語法錯誤。開門見山，說明睡眠的重要，然而許多學(xué)生沒有足夠的睡眠時間。緊接著說明沒有足夠睡眠時間的原因是什么，并且說明怎樣才能保證足夠的睡眠時間。這樣，有了足夠的睡眠，才能過得健康幸�？鞓罚》�合題目的要求，是一篇好作文。

考點(diǎn)：健康保健類短文。