Question

書面表達(dá) （共l 題，計(jì) 15 分）

目前有不少學(xué)生擁有自己的手機(jī)，青少年俱樂(lè)部關(guān)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題做了一個(gè)調(diào)查，并收集了關(guān)于學(xué)生擁有手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和不足，請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查的信息，談?wù)勛约旱母惺芎涂捶ā?/p>

	Do you agree students should have a mobile phone at school ?
46% of students agree.	54% of students don’t agree.
Mobile phone is very useful.	They think it can bring some problems.
make a call anywhere send text messages take photos keep friends’ phone numbers … …	make noise harm people’s physical health dangerous be bad for study … …
I think ……

要求：1.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出不計(jì)入總數(shù)。

2.內(nèi)容必須包括上面的要點(diǎn)，自己適當(dāng)加入個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。

3.條理清楚，語(yǔ)句連貫

Now more and more students have mobile phones._______________________

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Answer 1

Now more and more students have mobile phones.Youth club makes a survey about if you agree students should have a mobile phone at school.

According to the survey,46% of students agree students should have a mobile phone at school.They think mobile phone is very useful.for example,they can make a call anywhere,send text messages, take photos,keep friends’ phone numbers and so on.But 54% of students don’t agree.They think it can bring some problems.It can make noise,harm people’s physical health,it is dangerous,it is bad for study.

In my opinion,students can have a mobile phone at school ,because they can keep in touch with friend and parents,but students should use it in a proper way ,don’t make it influence your study and health.

【解析】

試題分析：要求根據(jù)提示寫份調(diào)查報(bào)告，并談一談你對(duì)帶手機(jī)上學(xué)的看法，注意本篇文章的時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1.本篇文章敘述詳細(xì)，把所有觀點(diǎn)及原因都描述得很清晰到位。

2.本篇文章最后點(diǎn)明了作者的觀點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)利用手機(jī)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文