Question

書面表達(dá) (本大題共5分)

假設(shè)你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到了Wildlife Protection Club (野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)俱樂(lè)部) 招募志愿者的廣告。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封信給俱樂(lè)部主席Mr. Brown，申請(qǐng)加入該俱樂(lè)部，并表示，如果能加入，將會(huì)很開心。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格信息和提示完成申請(qǐng)信。

學(xué)校	Sunshine Secondary School
年級(jí)	八年級(jí)
品德	勤奮, 樂(lè)于助人
愛好	籃球和旅游，從小喜愛動(dòng)物
申請(qǐng)理由	……
聯(lián)系方式	0510—87654321，lihua@sunshinetown.com

注意：1．詞數(shù)70左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．信須包括所有要點(diǎn)，申請(qǐng)理由用2-3句適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3．不得透露班級(jí)、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。

Dear Mr. Brown,

I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.

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I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Mr. Brown,

I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.

I am a student in Grade 8 at Sunshine Secondary School. I am very hard-working and helpful. I love playing basketball and travelling. I loved animals when I was very young. I would like to learn more about animals. And I

hope to do something for animals.

I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club. Please call me on 0515-87654321 or e-mail me at lihua@sunshinetown.com.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，李華寫給野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)俱樂(lè)部主席布朗先生的一封申請(qǐng)信。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I would like to...；I am ...；I hope to...；I will be....等句式的運(yùn)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)了期望收到布朗先生的回信的意愿。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭李華介紹了自己想要加入野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)俱樂(lè)部，接下來(lái)介紹自己的基本情況：身份、性格、愛好，最后介紹了自己的聯(lián)系方式。此處on the Internet，would like to do sth, love doing sth, hope to do sth, look forward to doing sth 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用以及if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句 if I can be a member of your club.的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。