Question

15．根據(jù)要求完成大作文
在你的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，許多人、許多事物一直在陪伴著你、支持著你、溫暖著你，讓你感動(dòng)、伴你成長(zhǎng)．請(qǐng)以"Say thanks to____"為題，寫一篇短文．
要求：1．寫出要感謝的對(duì)象、原因及感激語(yǔ)言；
2．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意通順、連貫；
3．詞數(shù)70左右，書寫工整、規(guī)范；
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
She usually gets up very early in the morning no matter how cold it is．
句中"no matter how cold it is"為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，這句話意為：無(wú)論天多冷，她通常早晨起來(lái)很早．
高分句型二：
If someone has problems or questions，she will help them warmly．
句中"If someone has problems or questions"為條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循"主將從現(xiàn)"原則．這句話意為：如果有人有困難或者問(wèn)題，她會(huì)熱心幫助他們．

解答 Say thanks to my mother
My mother is a beautiful and hard--working woman．I think she is one of  the best mothers．（點(diǎn)明主旨）
She usually gets up very early in the morning no matter how cold it is．【高分句型一】She makes delicious food for us every day so that we can have a healthy body．My mother is very kind and helpful．If someone has problems or questions，she will help them warmly．【高分句型二】Sometimes，she is very busy with housework after work，but she always do it herself with a smile on her face．On weekends，she often goes to visit my grandparents and tell us funny stories．（媽媽的付出，感恩的原因）
I love my mother，she is always so kind to us．I must say thanks to her．（感恩媽媽，升華主題）

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