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15．假設(shè)不久前8名無錫青年騎車沿大運(yùn)河（（the Grand Canal）進(jìn)行了慈善行活動．請據(jù)此在答題卡指定的位置上，以"A Charity Bicycle Trip"為題，為某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
    1．目的為希望工程籌款；
    2．時(shí)間：5月20日離開無錫，6月5日到達(dá)北京；
    3．簡況：雖然車程漫長，路途艱辛，但是他們一路上精神高昂；在很多人的幫助下，他們籌得善款5萬多元；
    4．其它：他們在活動結(jié)束后的感受．
    注意：
    1．報(bào)道須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；
    2．第4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
    3．詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，報(bào)道的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
                                A Charity Bicycle Trip
    Not long ago，eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal．__________________

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Though the ride was long and tough，they went all the way in high spirits雖然旅程漫長而艱難，但他們一路還是興高采烈．though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．
句型二：They were proud of what they had done．他們?yōu)樗麄兯�做的感到自豪．what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．

解答 A Charity Bicycle Trip
Not long ago，eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal．The purpose of their trip was to raise money for Project Hope．（此行目的）They left Wuxi on May 20 and arrived in Beijing on June 5．（時(shí)間）Though the ride was long and tough，they went all the way in high spirits．【高分句型一】With the help of the people，they collected/raised more than 50，000 yuan．（簡況）After the long trip，they were tired，but they were happy．They were proud of what they had done．【高分句型二】It is an unusual experience that they will never forget．（其他）

點(diǎn)評 在寫作時(shí)需要明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，所以平時(shí)應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问剑�積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．