Question

20．暑假快到了，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，給計劃要去旅行的朋友一些提
醒和建議．要求：
1．所給的提示詞要全部用上；
2．要點完整，語言準確，每一點做適當?shù)耐卣梗?br />3．詞數(shù)：60詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

What to do	travel with，know…about，take，drink…
What not to do	go to dangerous places，swim alone…

When you plan to take a trip on your holiday，you should prepare well for it．           

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 You should plan to travel with your friends．你應(yīng)該和你的朋友一起去旅行．should，應(yīng)該，表示建議．  
   高分句型二
  If you like to swim，remember you shouldn't swim alone．  如果你喜歡游泳，記住你不應(yīng)該獨自游泳．  這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 When you plan to take a trip on your holiday，you should prepare well for it．   You should plan to travel with your friends．【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】Friends can help keep you safe and share the fun．【開頭點明主題】
     You should plan where you want to go．You should know something about the weather there and take the right clothing．You need to carry a map and decide what you want to visit．
     You should be careful．Don't go to dangerous places．If your trip is in the summer，you had better drink lots of safe water．You should put on a hat and don't stay in the sun too long．If you like to swim，remember you shouldn't swim alone【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】．【正文部分詳細介紹建議】
     Enjoy your holiday trip!【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．