Question

9．你叫Tom，你有一個(gè)筆友叫Bob，請用以下內(nèi)容給他發(fā)一份郵件，介紹一下你自己的情況．（100詞左右）提示：
（1）你在一所美麗的中學(xué)上學(xué)，并且，你在學(xué)校的音樂俱樂部，喜歡跳舞和彈鋼琴；
（2）在你的學(xué)校，有許多規(guī)定：按時(shí)到校、不來遲到、不允許打架等；
（3）學(xué)校離家很近，經(jīng)常步行上學(xué)，認(rèn)為這是一種很好的鍛煉方式；
（4）你非常想念Bob，希望他也能寫信給你介紹一下他的近況．
Dear Bob，
Istudy in a beautiful middle school，andI amin the school music club，I like dancing and playing the piano，here are many rules in my school，we should come to school on time，we shouldn't be late for school，we are not allowed to fight．My home is near my school，I often go to school on foot，I think it is a good way to exercise．Myfavorite sport is basket-ball．I think it can make me much stronger and healthier．How about your school and your hobbies？Please write to me soon．
Yours friend
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  there are many rules in my school我的學(xué)校有很多規(guī)定．      這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
 高分句型二
I think it can make me much stronger and healthier我認(rèn)為它能使我更強(qiáng)壯更健康．這是一個(gè)賓語從句，think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 Dear Bob，
I study in  a beautiful middle school，and I am in the school music club，I like dancing and playing the piano【要點(diǎn)一，學(xué)校情況】，there are many rules in my school【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】，we should come to school on time，we shouldn't be late for school，we are not allowed to fight【要點(diǎn)二，學(xué)校規(guī)則】．My home is near my school，I often go to school on foot，I think it is a good way to exercise．My favorite sport is basket-ball．I think it can make me much stronger and healthier【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)三，上學(xué)方式】How about your school and your hobbies？I miss you very much．Please write to me soon．【要點(diǎn)四，讓他盡快回信】
Yours friend
Tom．

點(diǎn)評 動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤．