Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）

你的理想是什么？為什么選擇這樣的理想？你打算怎樣去實現(xiàn)它？請以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇60詞左右的短文。

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Answer 1

My dream

I want to be an artist when I grow up. I like drawing. When I was a little kid, I ever won the first in a drawing competition. I hope to have my own art room. I am taking art lessons every weekend. My art teacher is kind to me. But he is strict with me. I think he can help me to make my dream come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給思路比較清晰，動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: My art teacher is kind to me.我的美術(shù)老師對我很好；I think he can help me to make my dream come true.我認(rèn)為他會幫助我實現(xiàn)我的夢想。學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。