Question

19．假設(shè)在最近的英語(yǔ)課上，大家對(duì)"Should children do volunteer work？"進(jìn)行了討論．有些人贊成，有些人反對(duì)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告，并在最后陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)并簡(jiǎn)單闡述理由．

ideas	agreement	disagreement	your idea
reasons	1．能幫助自己以后獲得理想的工作． 2．在做自己喜歡的事情的同時(shí)也可以幫助他人．	1．孩子們還太小無(wú)法照顧別人． 2．學(xué)業(yè)壓力已經(jīng)夠大無(wú)時(shí)間去做志愿者．	…

注意：
1．短文詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右，不包括開頭部分．
2．以下短語(yǔ)可供參考 get future dream job；  at the same time；  too much pressure；
too young to look after others
Should children do volunteer work？
Recently，students in our class had a discussion about whether children should do volunteer work．
                                     

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類話題作文．請(qǐng)你寫一篇關(guān)于"Should children do volunteer work？"的調(diào)查報(bào)告．話題貼近學(xué)生生活，使學(xué)生易于發(fā)揮．作文可以分為三個(gè)方面：1．同意者的理由；2．反對(duì)者的理由；3．你的觀點(diǎn)．要做到層次分明，段落清楚．主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)要準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)要齊全，內(nèi)容要合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)要連貫，還應(yīng)滿足詞數(shù)要求．
①They think the children are too young to look after others．他們認(rèn)為孩子太小，不能照顧別人．句子中think后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；too…to…太…而不能…
②They also have too much schoolwork to do．他們也有太多的功課要做．這里too much表示太多，修飾不可數(shù)名詞．

解答 Should children do volunteer work？
Recently，students in our class had a discussion about whether children should do volunteer work．（引出話題）
Some of us agree．They think doing volunteer work can help them get the ideal job in the future．At the same time doing the thing that oneself like can also help others．（贊成的原因）
On the other hand，others disagree．They think the children are too young to look after others．（高分句型） They also have too much schoolwork to do．（高分句型）They have too much pressure．They don't have enough free time to do volunteer work．（反對(duì)的原因）
In my opinion，I think children should do volunteer work because I think volunteering is great．I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do．And from volunteering I can learn many things that I have never learned in class．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該文內(nèi)容合理，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，段落清晰，要點(diǎn)齊全．