Question

書面表達(dá) (共1小題 ； 滿分20分)

不以規(guī)矩，難成方圓。生活中總會(huì)有這樣或者那樣地規(guī)定。我們學(xué)校也有許多規(guī)定。

其中：1、學(xué)生每天必須穿校服上學(xué)。

不許化妝(make up)、不許打耳洞、男生不許留長發(fā)。

不許帶手機(jī)上學(xué)。

4、……

請用80-100字談?wù)勀銓Υ诵Ｒ?guī)的看法。

Answer 1

We need a school policy

Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. Life is always full of all kinds of rules, so does our school. For example, students must wear uniforms to go to school everyday. In some school, students are not allowed to make up, pierce ears and boys can not wear long hairs. Nowadays, some more new school rules are added to the school policies. For instance, students can not bring phones to school. What’s more, for some strict school, students are not allowed to go outside without a note and so on.

In my opinion, school policy is a necessity for the students. It can help students get rid of some bad habits and regulate their own behaviors and. Besides, it can help create a strong school atmosphere for students to study. In a word, we need a school policy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards，無規(guī)矩不成方圓；create a strong school atmosphere創(chuàng)造濃厚的敘述氛圍等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。