Question

19．假如你是班長李明，你將安排你班外教的兒子Tom來漢的活動．請用電子郵件告知．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下，
1．參觀城市博物館．了解武漢文化；
2．走進(jìn)課堂，交流學(xué)習(xí)情況；
3．去東湖劃船，欣賞風(fēng)景；
4．在家舉辦朋友聚會，品 嘗美食；
5．補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)個人想法．
注意：
1．文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱
2．詞數(shù)：60-80
3．內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；
4．郵件的開頭已給出．不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：City Museum 城市博物館 The East Lake東湖 view  n．景色
Hi Tom，
I'm glad to hear you'll come to Wuhan．
Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture and history．Visiting City Museum is a good way to
learn about Wuhan．We can go boating in the East Lake．Enjoying the fascinating views．
Then，we'll invite you to our class and talk about school life．My friends and I will have a
party for you at home．And you can taste our traditional food as well．If possible，you may watch Han Show．Hope you'll have fun here．
L i Ming
Yours
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture and history武漢是一個充滿文化和歷史的美麗的城市．
full of culture and history介詞短語做后置定語，修飾city．
【高分句型二】
If possible，you may watch Han Show如果可能，你可以觀看漢秀．
if possible是if it is possible的省略，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句

解答 Hi Tom，
I'm glad to hear you'll come to Wuhan．Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture and history．【高分句型一】Visiting City Museum is a good way to learn about Wuhan．（參觀城市博物館．了解武漢文化）we can go boating in the East Lake．Enjoying the fascinating views（去東湖劃船，欣賞風(fēng)景；）．Then．we'll invite you to our class and talk about school life．（走進(jìn)課堂，交流學(xué)習(xí)情況）My friends and I will have a party for you at home．And you can taste our traditional food as well．（在家舉辦朋友聚會，品 嘗美食） If possible，you may watch Han Show．【高分句型二】Hope you'll have fun here．（個人想法）
 L i Ming

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