Question

Writing(本題共15分，A題5分，B題10分)

（注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和老師名）

（A）假如你叫林濤，今天早上來(lái)上學(xué)時(shí)，出了一個(gè)小事故，你的自行車被一輛小汽車撞了，你從自行車上掉下來(lái)。你的腿受了傷，現(xiàn)在在醫(yī)院住院。請(qǐng)你具以上內(nèi)容向你的班主任請(qǐng)假一周。要求簡(jiǎn)單明了，內(nèi)容完整。時(shí)間是2013年10月15日。

­­­­ (B) 現(xiàn)在的中學(xué)生活潑、開(kāi)朗，信息量大，接受新事物很快。但是，怎樣做一名好學(xué)生,是擺在每個(gè)學(xué)生面前的課題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己及周圍的實(shí)際情況，圍繞這一話題，展開(kāi)思路，談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?/span>

要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言豐富、表達(dá)合理、語(yǔ)法正確。 2. 詞數(shù)：80—100詞。

How To Be a Good Student

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Answer 1

（A）Dear Mr Wang,

When I came to school this morning, a small accident happened. I was hit by by a car. I fell off my bike. My leg was injured, now I am in the hospital so I ask for leave one day.

yours

LinTao

(B) How to be a good student

We all hope to become excellent student . However, how to become a good student ?

First of all, we should go to school on time . And we should listen to the teacher in class . We should take notes carefully in class .

Second, we should help the students who need help . We should respect the elder .It is duty to do that.

Third, it is important to have a constructive philosophy of life. If we are defeated, don't be disappointed. Try to face our life and our studies with courage and determination.

In a word, if we do well in these .We will become good student !

【解析】

試題分析：第一篇作文是應(yīng)用文，第二篇是一篇話題作文，自己發(fā)揮的空間很大。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】第一篇應(yīng)用文格式正確，內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)略而清晰。第二篇敘述的很條理，F(xiàn)irst of all，Second, Third, In a word,.使文章更富有邏輯。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。