Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共1小題，計(jì)15分）

健康的生活方式對(duì)我們的影響到底有多大？看看Henry的變化，你就知道答案了。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容的提示，以“A healthy lifestyle is important” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于70詞的短文來(lái)描述Henry的變化。(在作文中要體現(xiàn)形容詞的比較級(jí)，至少一句話)

Time	Two years ago	Now
Habit	Have much meat and cola	Like vegetables and fruit
Health	Hardly ever exercise; often feel tired	Run every morning; feel well
Study	Weak in all the subjects	Make great progress(進(jìn)步) in every subject

A healthy lifestyle is important

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

A healthy lifestyle is important to everyone. Henry used to have much meat and cola two years ago and he hardly did exercise. So he often felt tired. What’s worse, he was weak in all the subjects because he wasn’t healthy enough to study well. However, he lives a healthier life now. He likes eating more vegetables and fruit. He runs every morning and he feels better. He even make great progress in every subject. In a word, a healthy lifestyle has made Henry stronger and better.

【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)表格信息寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹Henry兩年前和現(xiàn)在的改變，說(shuō)明健康的生活方式的重要性。寫(xiě)作應(yīng)注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)和層次，應(yīng)注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確運(yùn)用。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，先介紹了過(guò)去，再介紹現(xiàn)在。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾點(diǎn)明了文章的主旨。本文準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)。文章銜接連貫，運(yùn)用了what’s worse, however, because, in a word等連詞進(jìn)行銜接。同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的形容詞比較級(jí)，為文章增色不少。如: healthier, more, better, stronger等。

考點(diǎn)：圖表作文。