Question

2．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來越發(fā)達，中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的利弊已成為人們討論的焦點．請參考下面的信息并結(jié)合自己的觀點寫一篇60-80詞的短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />

Pros	Cons
課后放松	長時間上網(wǎng)有害健康
輔助學(xué)習(xí)	沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，不思學(xué)業(yè)
傳遞信息快捷，開拓視野	不良網(wǎng)站，誤導(dǎo)學(xué)子
網(wǎng)絡(luò)交流，交友…	虛擬網(wǎng)絡(luò)，真假難辨…

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet他們可以快速的從網(wǎng)絡(luò)上獲取想要的信息．
that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾information．
【高分句型二】
①In my opinion，②whether it is good to use the Internet depends on ourselves依我看來，使用電腦是否有益取決于我們自己．
①in one's opinion依某人看來．
②從句作為主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．

解答 Today the Internet develops more and more quickly．People have different opinions on the influence to students．
          Some people think the Internet is good for the students．The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax．They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet．They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet．【高分句型一】It makes the students learn more in the world．What's more，the students can make friends and chat with each other on the Internet．This can help them grow up better．（利）
         However，some people think the Internet is bad for the students．They think the children spend too much time on it and it's bad for their health．If the children always play it，they don't want to study any more．Some bad websites lead the students to know the bad things．Besides，the Internet is not true．The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong．（弊）
 In my opinion，whether it is good to use the Internet depends on ourselves．【高分句型二】We can spare some time to search the important information online．When we are tired，the music and films on the Internet can also make us relaxed．It's up to you，my friends．（我的觀點）

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