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              A Review of The Smurfs

        The Smurfs is an interesting 3D movie published by Sony Pictures.It is a comedy based on the famous American cartoon.It's about a group of small Smurfs who are small blue fictional creatures living in mushroom houses in a forest.They have tried everything to protect their beloved home.The movie is very amusing and fuuny for children.I think it's a feast for our eyes to enjoy the movie.Time goes fast!On the way home,the audience are falling in love with those lovely smurfs.What a nice movie!

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be based on 以...為基礎(chǔ)；it‘s a feast for our eyes 視覺(jué)盛宴；time goes fast時(shí)間過(guò)得很快；fall in love with 愛(ài)上；what a ...=how +adj.

作文思路：

1. 看清題目要求和內(nèi)容，不能走題

2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾可以用經(jīng)典句式

3. 多用各種從句，定語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，表語(yǔ)從句

4. 多用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，寫復(fù)合句，少用簡(jiǎn)單句

5. 同義詞轉(zhuǎn)換，高級(jí)詞匯，詞組

6. 書(shū)寫工整