Question

【題目】地震是一種自然災(zāi)害。學(xué)會(huì)在不同的地方用不同的自救方法非常重要。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下表內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹一些自救常識(shí)。注意表達(dá)規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。

Answer 1

【答案】 An earthquake is a kind of natural disaster. It may lead to serious results and make lots of people lose their homes or even lives. So it is important for us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake.

If you are at home, it's safe to hide under the bed or strong tables. Cover your head and arms. If you are in a classroom, stay under the desk. After the shake stops, you can run outside as soon as possible. When you are outside, you should quickly run to an open space. Stay away from buildings or trees. When you are driving a car, stop it by the roadside at once, and stay inside. Never stop your car near a bridge.

Remember to keep calm and try to protect yourself when an earthquake starts.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。結(jié)合所給材料，介紹地震來(lái)臨時(shí)，我們要掌握的一些自救常識(shí)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、條件狀語(yǔ)從句和祈使句，主要人稱為單數(shù)第二，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用和短語(yǔ)，比如：If……，It is +形容詞 +for sb. to do sth.；Remember to do sth.；keep calm。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的交友意愿。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

這篇短文介紹地震來(lái)臨時(shí)，我們要掌握的一些自救常識(shí)。并且并包含了圖表中所列舉的全部信息。其中條件狀語(yǔ)，固定句型和短語(yǔ)的使用準(zhǔn)確、代詞運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，介紹時(shí)條理清晰，有條不紊，是一篇不錯(cuò)的英語(yǔ)范文。